More and more families are choosing fast food over home cooked meal. What are the reasons and how they can be addressed?

Increasingly nuclear families are selecting

junk

food

over homemade cooking.

This

is mainly because

of

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they are very easy to

cook

.

However

, in order to address

this

problem

government

has to take strict action by raising the tax. The aim of

this

essay is to investigate the factors that led to these problems and propose some possible methods to deal with

it

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. One of the most contingent reasons for

the

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choosing fast

food

is they are very simple to

cook

. Due to an era of technology,

such

foods

are easily available in the market and can be cooked by following simple steps.

As a result

, many people who do not get

time

to

cook

food

at

home

as they are working all the

time

in order to have a better standard of living or to

fulfill

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their basic needs,

they

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prefer

such

foods

over

home

meals.

For instance

, in our

country

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85% of people who are working from morning to evening go

on

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the market and purchase

such

junk

foods

because they are tired and do not have enough

time

to

cook

at

home

.

Thus

,

such

foods

are more purchased

instead

of

eating

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at the house.

Possible

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solution to

this

problem is

the

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government

should increase the taxes on

such

companies

who

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manufacture

such

junk

foods

. To elaborate, if the higher authorities increase tax heavily on these companies, a common person or the working class will not able to purchase

such

food

because these companies would cover

such

taxes indirectly by charging for them. For

this

reason, they will switch to

home

-cooked

food

.

For example

, the

government

of Japan

had

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increased the rate of tax from 10% to 25% on

the

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fast-

food

manufacturers’ in order to make its citizen

to

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eat

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home-cooked

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home cooked

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meals rather than eating

junk

food

outside,

resulted

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in

they

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them

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are

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active, fit and happy. To conclude,

having

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a better life or

fulfilling

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basic needs a person works all the

time

and

choose

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to eat processed

food

instead

of

home

food

. Only when the

government

would raise the taxes on

such

manufacturers’ who manufacture

such

foods

, will

this

problem be solved.