More and more families are choosing fast food over home cooked meal. What are the reasons and how they can be addressed?

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Increasingly nuclear families are selecting
junk
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food
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over homemade cooking.
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is mainly because
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they are very easy to
cook
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.
However
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, in order to address
this
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problem
government
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has to take strict action by raising the tax. The aim of
this
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essay is to investigate the factors that led to these problems and propose some possible methods to deal with
it
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them
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. One of the most contingent reasons for
the
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choosing fast
food
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is they are very simple to
cook
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. Due to an era of technology,
such
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foods
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are easily available in the market and can be cooked by following simple steps.
As a result
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, many people who do not get
time
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to
cook
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food
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at
home
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as they are working all the
time
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in order to have a better standard of living or to
fulfill
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fulfil
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their basic needs,
they
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apply
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prefer
such
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foods
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over
home
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meals.
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, in our
country
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,country
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85% of people who are working from morning to evening go
on
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to
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the market and purchase
such
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junk
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foods
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because they are tired and do not have enough
time
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to
cook
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at
home
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.
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,
such
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foods
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are more purchased
instead
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of
eating
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eaten
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at the house.
Possible
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A possible
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solution to
this
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problem is
the
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for the
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government
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should increase the taxes on
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companies
who
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that
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manufacture
such
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junk
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foods
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. To elaborate, if the higher authorities increase tax heavily on these companies, a common person or the working class will not able to purchase
such
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food
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because these companies would cover
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taxes indirectly by charging for them. For
this
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reason, they will switch to
home
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-cooked
food
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.
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, the
government
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of Japan
had
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increased the rate of tax from 10% to 25% on
the
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apply
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fast-
food
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manufacturers’ in order to make its citizen
to
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eat
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home-cooked
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home cooked
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home-cooked
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meals rather than eating
junk
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food
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outside,
resulted
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resulting
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in
they
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them
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are
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being
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active, fit and happy. To conclude,
having
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to have
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a better life or
fulfilling
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fulfil
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basic needs a person works all the
time
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and
choose
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chooses
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to eat processed
food
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instead
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of
home
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food
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. Only when the
government
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would raise the taxes on
such
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manufacturers’ who manufacture
such
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foods
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, will
this
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problem be solved.
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