Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

At the present time, most

of

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individuals

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the individuals

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utilising

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the

internet

and mobile phones with aim of

transfer

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transferring

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cash for their close people like friends,

family

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members and even for their business. In my opinion, sharing

money

by

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via

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mobile phones or the

internet

is a positive development. There is no doubt that transferring

money

through the

internet

can create some convenience for our mankind. People may

transfer

big

amount

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of

money

with the help of

internet

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the internet

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and mobile

phone

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phones

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whenever they want,

as a

result

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this

process

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comfortable

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a comfortable

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situation for us.

For example

, even we are able to

transfer

money

via

internet

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while we stayed in

abroad

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country and

this

can be

truly

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comfortable condition.

Thus

we should use

transfer

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method in order to create some convenience which is really worthwhile to save an incredibly wasting time.

On the other hand

, to be sure that an increase

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demand

of

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for

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using

transfer

cash can be key

of

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wealth for cyber hackers. Today, hackers are able to know

individuals

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individuals'

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account

passport

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with lye when ordinary people filling the form of some documents, and

this

causing

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some problems like losing

money

on

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in

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their bank account.

For instance

, my uncle had

been

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transferred

money

for

him

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family members when he was abroad, and he was

stealed

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stolen

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3000

dollar

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dollars

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as a consequence of believing

to

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cyber hackers’ lied words.

However

,

although

this

kind of method of transferring

money

has some disadvantages, it can be far more helpful. To conclude, despite the fact that online transferring

money

has some negative

side

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, it can be way more beneficial to make convenience and

to

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save

the

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running out of time.