Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having fixed punishment?
There is an ongoing controversy that the efficient way of dealing with every
crime
is
by having a rigid disciplinary approach. Unnecessary verb
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essay will elucidate on the demerits of the statement which is
the unfairness it would put in the faces of the wrongdoers and injustice, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
however
the Add a comma
,however
positives
impact could be that it will totally reduce the Change the noun form
positive
crime
rates and improve security
of lives and properties.
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the security
To begin
with, the backbone of punishment is to correct man of his wrong acts, however
some of the acts could stand as Add a comma
,however
a
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self-defense
against an attack and Change the spelling
self-defence
also
it could be the only way to sustain him. For example
, a man who just lost his job and after several months of job-hunting yet to no avail, he will at this
point try to rob within his vicinity rather than to
die of hunger. Peradventure, his case is brought to a book of death sentence, he feels bad for Fix the infinitive
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such
punishment based on the minor crime
of stealing from his neighbor
in order to survive.
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,
the possible way of reducing criminal activities in any given society is by putting Remove the comma
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a
strict disciplinary action. More so, Correct article usage
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this
measurement will provide a better secured
and conducive environment Replace the word
secure
to
citizens. Change preposition
for
For example
, China uses more the death sentence for any crime
and this
rule has been laid over years. In fact, this
is the first
thing you get to hear as a visitor in
China and I believe it has structured the Change preposition
to
behaviors
of the Chinese. Change the spelling
behaviours
Additionally
, it is well known that China is one of the most secured
and conducive Replace the word
secure
country
within the globe because they are governed Change to a plural noun
countries
with
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by
strict
and rigid Add an article
a strict
the strict
rule
for any misconduct.
In conclusion, most people think that criminals should be punished equally irrespective of the evil acts done as it improves Fix the agreement mistake
rules
the
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the
criminal activities in an environment whereas others feel it is unjust.Correct article usage
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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