At
this
time, more and more
people
are attracted by
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celebrities
. They purchase their products and other expensive things and waste their
.
some
people
consider that music and other famous
people
to earn more
money
. I agree with
this
statement and the reasons
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my agreement are explained in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with,
audienceAdd an article
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areChange the verb form
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more showing
intersetCorrect your spelling
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towards
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well knownAdd a hyphen
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personsReplace the word
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.when
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celebrities
do some advertisement or wear branded clothes so locals
also
think that my
favoriteChange the spelling
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person
wearChange the verb form
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that so
iChange the capitalization
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should
also
buy that.
thus
the sales of products
goesChange the verb form
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high and the demand
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celebrities
alsoAdd a missing verb
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high.
ThatsCorrect your spelling
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why the organisers spend more
money
towards
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celebrities
.
For example
, in
this
era,
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idols are earning more
money
because crowds are following them,
also
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their products and whenever they post on youtube about their music so the public is streaming to
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all platforms and increasing their views.
Therefore
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idols are gaining much more popularity and remuneration.
Furthermore
, After the
the citizens are
more pop stars. Even they
also
collect
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money
for concerts
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and buy lightsticks. On social platforms more are more youngsters are streaming the songs like Spotify, YouTube and other
. So
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famous
people
collect more
money
with the use of
this
context.
On the other hand
, youngsters should stop
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theCorrect your spelling
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wasting their time on
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and other
. Youth should focus on their study rather than
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because some
celebrities
are not even sawChange the verb form
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the efforts
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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can do for them.
To conclude, it is good
thingsFix the agreement mistake
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to pop
startsCorrect your spelling
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earnWrong verb form
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money
,
they should
also
contribute the
money
towards
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society. So more
people
are liking them.