Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We all know that recently the
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of used products has become a big Correct your spelling
discard
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environmental
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environmental
consumism
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consumerism
add
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adds
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essay will discuss why it became a huge problem and how the Linking Words
government
can be involved to educate the population.
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buying
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furniture
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or even our Correct your spelling
furniture
day by day
necessities, but on another hand, not that much worried about how to Add a hyphen
day-by-day
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the
plastic containers, boxes, and other not biodegradable materials. Correct article usage
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intention
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intentions
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to
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properly, Correct your spelling
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however
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center
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or simply for disinformation.
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government
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problem and provide different ways to help society. Correct your spelling
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Firstly
we all have to be properly informed about how to separate the recycled materials from Linking Words
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garbage, it can be solved by Replace the word
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advertisement
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Secondly
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accessible
acessible
for everyone. Humanity can always be influenceable by good examples there are countries Correct your spelling
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in which
government
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ecologic
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initiative
the population started to take care of the overall community.
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government
and population effort, using all strategies available the rubbish problem can be at least minimized or totally solved.Use synonyms
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