PLASTIC BAGS, PLASTIC BOTTLES AND PLASTIC PACKAGING ARE BAD FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT DAMAGES DOES PLASTIC DO TO THE ENVIRONMENT? WHAT CAN BE DONE BY GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM?

It is undeniable fact that nowadays
people
crave to buy more and more
thing
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things
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without any need.
Also
, the manufacturer makes and packed all the
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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in a
plastic
material, because the product needs a specific shelf-life.
However
, the
use
of
plastic
garbage’s
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garbage
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and water bottles
have
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been increasing day by day, which
harmful
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for
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the environment. According to different surveys,
plastics
are
very
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harmful and direct impact on
human’s
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life. There are multitude
disadvantages
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of
the
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uses
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of
PVC based
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products.
Firstly
, polythene and other
plastic
garbage
use
are very badly
effective
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effect
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on the environment, because the process of recycling these
materials
are
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very long and complex as compared to paper bags.
Secondly
,
one
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plastic
bottles
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contain a number of bacteria which
is
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harm
children
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health. Recently, the government of India banned
plastic
polythene, due to the contamination process.
On the other hand
, there are a number of positive ways to stop using
plastic
materials
.
Firstly
,
people
must have to dump
plastics
in the proper dumping zone.
Secondly
, governments must have to plan some rules and regulations on
plastics
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plastic
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uses.
Thirdly
, nowadays
advertisement
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is very effective on individual’s mindset,
therefore
government have to show them how bad the
use
of
plastics
materials
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help of different billboards and through
the
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other broadcasting. In a nutshell, I believe that the
use
of
plastics
is only control
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by
people
, because if
people
want a good environment
than
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then
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they have to follow some rules as well as start the
use
of all kind of
materials
, which is recyclable
such
as paper bags, glass bottles and so on.
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