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Task 2 Academic Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

#people #children #home #child #development #school
Although
home schooling
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 is not a topic
that is
 generally discussed in Brazil
,
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 since it is not a typical way of studying in the country, actually it is possible that
this
 isn't even a possibility, it is common in other
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countries
coutries
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countries
 and it's
a
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 important topic to be discussed. It is common knowledge that social interaction is very important to
children
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children's
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 development and going to school,
specially
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 in the
first
 years of the
children
's
life
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, is a very good way to promote
these social interaction
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. With that said, it is
also
 known that each person is unique and
react
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different
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 to
the
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each situation and in some cases, going to school can cause negative effects on kids and teenagers. The most important thing is to pay attention to
children
 and see how is it going the individual
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experience
experince
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experiences
 of each of them. If some of them are disliking the experience, having a bad performance in classes, not being able to make friends or
any
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 other problem
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that
tha
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that
 may happen, their cases should be looked at individually and with the help of school advisors,
psicologists
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psychologists
 and the people responsible for the child or teenager
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 must work together to choose what is the best option for that person. As was said before, the most important thing is to look at every child as an individual, and not try to decide which one of the two types of education is best for kids in general. The main goal should be the
children
 well being and what works better for them.
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