Task 2 Academic Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

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home schooling

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homeschooling

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is not a topic

that is

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generally discussed in Brazil

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since it is not a typical way of studying in the country, actually it is possible that

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isn't even a possibility, it is common in other

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countries

coutries

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countries

and it's

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important topic to be discussed. It is common knowledge that social interaction is very important to

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children

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children's

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development and going to school,

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especially

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in the

first

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years of the

children

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's

life

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lives

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, is a very good way to promote

these social interaction

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this social interaction

these social interactions

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. With that said, it is

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known that each person is unique and

react

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reacts

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different

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differently

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to

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each situation and in some cases, going to school can cause negative effects on kids and teenagers. The most important thing is to pay attention to

children

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and see how is it going the individual

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experience

experince

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experiences

of each of them. If some of them are disliking the experience, having a bad performance in classes, not being able to make friends or

any

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have any

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other problem

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that

tha

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that

may happen, their cases should be looked at individually and with the help of school advisors,

psicologists

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psychologists

and the people responsible for the child or teenager

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must work together to choose what is the best option for that person. As was said before, the most important thing is to look at every child as an individual, and not try to decide which one of the two types of education is best for kids in general. The main goal should be the

children

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well being and what works better for them.