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It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages.

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In recent years, some
people
 argued that success in terms of job positions and
relationships
 between confidants usually
take
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risks
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of taking
risks
 are significant not only for career paths but
also
 for private
life
.
Finally
, I will present my opinion. On the one hand, there are numerous benefits of risk-taking.
First
 and foremost, headway in a job must have
risks
 for changing in many factors but chance-taking can expedient the advancement of work goals.
For instance
, sales workers permit a tough project and
also
 change
location
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 for advancing their job duties.
Although
 they must have to sacrifice something, they will gain suitable compensation
such
 as salary adjustment and welfare benefits more than those
people
 who do not dare and exchange anything in their
life
.
Moreover
, an individual who takes
risks
 will
also
 more develop
relationships
.
On the other hand
, there can be benefits of risk-taking in various ways,
there
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 are
also
 cons. Lively riskily can negatively affect your
life
 in a few different ways.
First
 of all, the feeling of fear it cannot deny
that
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everyone is often afraid
to
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 the result. When circumstances are forced
people
 to decide, chance-taking is one of the alternative choices for solving the problem.
In contrast
, the effect did not work, which is decided with
risks
, for every situation. Unfortunately, some results cannot modify if
people
 choose the wrong methods.
As a result
, there are affected their whole
life
 or
relationships
 forever. In my point of view, I am generally in agreement with taking chances is progress and growth to the potential of
life
’s skills and personal
relationships
 between individuals surrounding.
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