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The table illustrates the number of foreign students who decided to study in two different countries between
Canada
 and the United States, which was compared from 2002 to 2003. In general, the number of students in the USA was more than that of
Canada
 but the
percentage
 was larger increased in
Canada
.
Firstly
, the proportion of pupils in
Canada
 dramatically rose in only one year in every nation.
In particular
, China students reached a peak of 45%, which grew by about 2000 people. At the same time, the
percentage
 in the
second
 land rose only 6% different by almost seven times from the former. The proportion of Indian pupils in
Canada
 rose remarkably by 35%, while in the USA dropped minimally to 9%. The Canadain who chose to learn in the United States has the highest
percentage
of
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 the table that
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 by 7%.
Similarly
, the
percentage
 of American citizens who studies in
Canada
 rose to 450 people from 2002 to the
next
 year.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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