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overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems

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There is no denying the fact that the main reason
of
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 many problems in the cities is
the
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overpopulation.
This
 essay will discuss some of the major challenges caused by
this
 phenomenon, and
then
 try to suggest some solutions.
First
 of all, after rural immigration, the
number
 of citizens in urban areas is exponentially increasing, which creates so many problems for the people living there, in the
first
 degree we find the degradation of life’s facilities and necessities,
such
 as hospitalisation, education, entertainment …etc. to illustrate, depend on latest statistics, the
number
 of students in Morocco rises from 24 per classroom to 40 which influence negatively the quality of learning, and
that is
 a real problem for the country.
Second
 of all, one of the most nightmares
on
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 urban is the huge
number
 of crimes especially in some neighbourhoods, on the top of the list we find stolen, which has one common reason,
that
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 is poverty due to the
number
 of people who could not find jobs because of the overpopulation.
Finally
, the problem is more complicated than it seems, which is why we need to react immediately. On one
hand
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 the government,
who
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needs to create more opportunities for work.
In addition
, the services must be improved to respond to the citizen’s needs. On other hand, people should be more aware of these issues. To conclude, there is no escape from
the
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overpopulation which is caused by many factors, and that produces important problems in cities.
However
, some serious decisions must be taken by either government
and
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or
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 individuals.
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