You want to learn a language. A teacher who teaches this language lives near the area where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter, •say how you came to know about him/her •explain why you want to learn this language •ask what help he/she can offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing great. I am writing

this

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letter to tell you that I want to learn the French

language

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and my friend suggests to me your name that the teacher is the best in our town to teach a new

language

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. I will explain the whole situation.

Firstly

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, French is a second

language

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of Canada and it is essential to get a good in a multinational company. If I learn French

then

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I will be bilingual which

also

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helps me to get permanent residency in Canada as it has additional points.

Moreover

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, learning a new

language

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enhances my personality

as well as

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I can understand the culture of Canadian people.

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, I request you please make a schedule for the evening so I can get coaching from you. I am very grateful to you for teaching me French. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Love

tajinder.panagTue Jan 16 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a unique and clear idea to improve coherence.

task achievement

Task achievement could be improved by providing more specific details about the writer's background and context for learning French.

coherence cohesion

Use varied sentence structure and transitional phrases to enhance logical progression and readability.

task achievement

The letter's tone is appropriately formal, but consider using a more consistent and targeted formal address (either Sir or Madam, not both).

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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