In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

For the easiest way of reading , an increasing
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e-books
. There are a
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e-books
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more facilities Compared to drawbacks. There are a
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believe that the benefits of reading outweigh the disbenefits. One possible reason is that
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can get various favour from
e-books
. To clarify, when a person
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to read a story,
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poem, he can easily get it by using
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book
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their
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library,
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search for a particular
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carry a
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As a result
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e-books
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boor. Suddenly he remember that if he get a
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her boring
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e-
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numerous amenities of
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a few disamenities.
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who use
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electronic device. Without
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it cannot be possible to
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they must be connected
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who live in
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. As we know that
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book
.
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say that reading
e-books
has lots of positive sides than negative sides.
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also
we need to give money for transportation. But we
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do not
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because of
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although
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some discomfort
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reading
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,
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strongly believe that the advantages of
e-books
can exceed the drawbacks of it.
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