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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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For the easiest way of reading , an increasing
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 of people prefer to read
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. There are a
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 of advantages that
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readers
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 more facilities Compared to drawbacks. There are a
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 of reasons why
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 believe that the benefits of reading outweigh the disbenefits. One possible reason is that
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 can get various favour from
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. To clarify, when a person
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poem, he can easily get it by using
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library,
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search for a particular
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to
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carry a
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 can reduce their efforts as well as save
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 boor. Suddenly he remember that if he get a
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, it will be good for him to
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. At
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book
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users
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. Despite
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numerous amenities of
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,there
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 a few disamenities.
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 who use
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e-books
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 it will
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. As we know that
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e-books
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book
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 say that reading
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 has lots of positive sides than negative sides.
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, to read a
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novel
novek
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novel
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 we have to buy
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also
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do not
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. To sum up,
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are
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of
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 reading
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,
i
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 strongly believe that the advantages of
e-books
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 can exceed the drawbacks of it.
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