Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. ??
It is often argued that there is nothing we can do
to
the adverse effects done to the plant and animal kingdom by the various human activities, while others suggest that there is still hope to improve the situation. In my opinion, I believe that it is not too late to take effective action to reverse the outcome.
Change preposition
about
First
of all, it is widely recognised that doing something at the present could not alter the effects done to the environment. Linking Words
This
is because massive damage has already been done. Linking Words
For example
, it Linking Words
have
been years now that several organizations have campaigned in clearing up the oceans of the debris from Change the verb form
has
the
plastic bottles, but Correct article usage
apply
unfortunately
their efforts could not save the marine mammals who perish from consuming plastics that they Add a comma
,unfortunately
mistaken
for food.
Add the auxiliary verb
mistook
have mistaken
On the other hand
, it is clear that people should take effective action to escalate the situation. A key reason for Linking Words
this
is that Linking Words
Linking Words
this
planet, Correct determiner usage
the
that
we are currently living, is the only livable place that we have. Correct word choice
where
For instance
, with the advent of technology, the use of plastics can be eliminated and replaced with materials Linking Words
that
Linking Words
is
more Change the verb form
are
environment
friendly.
In conclusion, I strongly Replace the word
environmentally
Correct your spelling
believe
belive
that we must take care of the environment for Correct your spelling
believe
our
future generations. It is not too late to take Correct pronoun usage
apply
actions
and there is still Fix the agreement mistake
action
chance
for a better future.Add an article
a chance
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite