You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to report a problem with the 3D mouse device that I purchased in June

this

year from your company's website. I have the full

kepad

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keypad

version of 3D connection model 2.0 with serial number 9D4567G8, which is still

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warranty. The issue I am facing with the 3D mouse is that the knob is not working in some particular axis motions while I try to operate it on my design modelling software and sometimes it

also

gets stuck in a random orientation causing movement of the model in a repeated loop.

Moreover

, some of the numeric keys on the keypad are

also

not working. Currently, due to the problems with my 3D mouse device, I am limited in my job functionality which requires working on large 3D assemblies.

This

is a major inconvenience which affects my productivity and overall efficiency in a major portion of my job responsibilities. As a solution, I would like to get an expedited delivery of the

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replacement piece of a similar model with equal or better specifications since

this

is a warranty claim. I will be happy to return the faulty device to the company for any diagnostics you might want to do. Looking forward to

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resolution of the matter. Yours Faithfully, Darshit Nimavat

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

222 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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