You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to report a problem with the 3D mouse device that I purchased in June
this
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year from your company's website. I have the full
kepad
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keypad
version of 3D connection model 2.0 with serial number 9D4567G8, which is still
in
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warranty. The issue I am facing with the 3D mouse is that the knob is not working in some particular axis motions while I try to operate it on my design modelling software and sometimes it
also
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gets stuck in a random orientation causing movement of the model in a repeated loop.
Moreover
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, some of the numeric keys on the keypad are
also
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not working. Currently, due to the problems with my 3D mouse device, I am limited in my job functionality which requires working on large 3D assemblies.
This
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is a major inconvenience which affects my productivity and overall efficiency in a major portion of my job responsibilities. As a solution, I would like to get an expedited delivery of the
free of charge
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replacement piece of a similar model with equal or better specifications since
this
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is a warranty claim. I will be happy to return the faulty device to the company for any diagnostics you might want to do. Looking forward to
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resolution of the matter. Yours Faithfully, Darshit Nimavat
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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