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Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who do this.

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It is true that more
students
 prefer enrolling in
university
 to working after high school. There are several disadvantages to doing
this
;
however
, the advantages are far more significant.
On the other hand
, there can be some minor disadvantages to going to
university
 right after high school. The
first
 detrimental effect is that
students
 who are vague about their dream may choose the wrong course to study. They may follow trends in the job market and choose a career which may be not suitable for them. The
second
 drawback is that
students
 in high school may not have enough soft skills to live a
university
 life.
Accordingly
, they will have to encounter stress in the higher study environment in which they are not well prepared.
Nevertheless
,
students
 who are not taking a
gap
year
 to work before the
university
 can have major advantages. For those
students
 who are determined to choose their future careers, taking a
gap
year
 is a waste of their
time
. The sooner they start studying in
university
 the earlier they can gain real-life business experience. Thereby, these
students
 with a bachelor's degree, young age, and experiences will stand out in the view of recruiters. Another beneficial effect worth mentioning is these
students
 will have more
time
 to fix their mistakes if they realise the course is inappropriate for them. Saving
time
 from not taking a
gap
year
 and having
time
 to pivot into another course of their preference when needed is a huge advantage these
students
 have. In conclusion, despite the potential of disadvantages not taking a
gap
year
, the advantages are more dominant when comparing different aspects.
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