some peolpe say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of paticular species of plants and animals. others say thar that are more important environmental problems. discuss both views? and give your own ipnion?
In
this
present-day world, it has to be said that the climate
problems
are because of extinction
of some flora and fauna as everything is connected by a biological cycle, Correct article usage
the extinction
however
other
argue that other environmental issues are pivotal. There are certain Correct pronoun usage
others
problems
such
as global warming and ozone depletion because of co2 and other toxic gases from fossil fuel
, factories, and electronic appliances. The aforementioned issues may pave the way for sordid conditions like Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
artic
ice melting, Correct your spelling
arctic
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and minimize
minimize
the salinity of Wrong verb form
minimising
sea water
and Correct your spelling
seawater
this
may be a threat for
sea creatures. Change preposition
to
Finally
, leads to flood
and Fix the agreement mistake
floods
climate
change. I believe that,
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apply
problems
like extinction
of plants and animals as well as other issues have Add an article
the extinction
consider
to curb environmental Change the verb form
considered
problems
.
Firstly
, it is an undeniable fact that plants and animals have imperative
role in Add an article
an imperative
maintain
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maintaining
environment
. By Correct article usage
the environment
this
I mean, many creatures helps
in Change the verb form
help
pollination
of plants. To cite an example, Correct article usage
the pollination
dragon flies
are collection pollination powder from flowers and release it somewhere for pollination. Another instance is Correct your spelling
dragonflies
Dodo
bird, it Correct article usage
the Dodo
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extinct
extincted
years ago Correct your spelling
extinct
used
to help in softening a specific plant seed Correct word choice
and used
in
Mauritius island for Change preposition
on
next
plant growth. Unfortunately, both Correct article usage
the next
Dodo
bird and that specific plant Correct article usage
the Dodo
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extinct
extracted
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were extincted
extincted
from Correct your spelling
extinct
earth
. Add an article
the earth
This
led to climate
change in
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on
the
Mauritius Island.
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apply
However
, there are other important problems
we have to consider such
as global warming and ozone depletion. The climate
is getting heat every year due to co2 and other toxic gases expulsion, this
may pave the way for artic
ice glacier melting and Correct your spelling
arctic
decrease
in Correct article usage
a decrease
salinity
of Correct article usage
the salinity
Correct your spelling
seawater
sea water
In conclusion, it is stated that both flora and fauna extinction and other Correct your spelling
seawater
problems
like global warming and ozone depletion are equally pivotal for maintain
our environment in its natural rhythmChange the verb form
maintaining
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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