Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain • Why you are writing to them • Why you think insurance should not be increased • What you want them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with your company’s decision regarding increase
Add an article
the increase
of
Change preposition
in
monthly
insurance premium Correct article usage
the monthly
against
my car which is insured with your company Change preposition
for
since
Change preposition
for
last
10 years.
As you know, I insured all of my previous cars with your company, and the present car has Correct article usage
the last
also
been enjoying the same benefit for a long time. Moreover
, the premium amount was increased by 10% in November last
year which I have paid without any complain
since it was done due to increasing inflationary pressure. Replace the word
complaints
Although
I have paid the full monthly instalment against the car insurance, I have not claimed any accidental or repair benefits yet. Hence
, I could not accept your decision of increasing the instalment amount by 25% this
time.
I would request you to
reconsider your policy of raising the payment amount, or Fix the infinitive
apply
otherwise
I am afraid to be forced to close the insurance account with your company and look for other cheaper options which are readily available in the market.
I will look forward to your positive response on Add a comma
,otherwise
this
matter.
Yours faithfully,
Sajia
AfrinCorrect your spelling
Sadia
Sajid
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite