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In many countries, men and women are working full time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
both
 males and females are doing full-day jobs and sharing their earnings to live
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happy life. In
this
 respect, some people believe that they should
also
 divide their household
work
 into two halves. A majority of society favours it, but the rest opposes it. The following paragraph would highlight my perspective which leads to a logical conclusion. In old age, males were the guardians of their families and worked day and night to meet the basic needs of their loved ones, while the females devoted their whole life to
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being housewife
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housewife
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. Men were not allowed to do
work
 in the kitchen and
women
 had no permission to do any kind of job outside the house. But as the world progressed, everything changed. Now
both
 genders enjoy equal rights. Men and
women
 are working together, gaining success in their careers and earning money for their lives. Apart from that, the mentality of our society is not changed and many people believe that husbands should only
work
 in their offices and are not allowed to help their
women
 in
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 kitchen.
For example
, if a girl is married to a boy,
both
 are jobians, but after returning from
work
, the female is cooking the food and the male is taking nap in the bedroom,
this
 kind of situation is against moral values.
Instead
 of taking nap, a husband should help his wife in making food. Another pivotal aspect is that males and females
both
 have similar body structures, one is not superior to the other. So that
both
 of them should help in every step of their life. To recapitulate, because of the aforementioned reasons, we may safely conclude that men should help their
women
 because they are
also
 humans and
also
 have the right to take rest after their jobs.
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