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Some people think it does not matter if a professional sportsman or sportswoman misbehaves on or off the field, as long as they play well. What is your opinion about it?

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Some
believe
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, that
sportsman
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 and sportswomen are allowed to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they perform well. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
 statement because no matter how well someone performs it is never an excuse to treat others in a bad way.
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 many females and males who are involved in
this
 field are role models for adolescents.
First
 and foremost, it is a general rule to be respectful to other human beings. Especially in ,sports
this
 is important. A Team can only perform well when all group members can respect and rely on each other.
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 tribe member behaving badly towards others leads to various problems. No matter if they perform at their best and are highly successful.
This
 is not an excuse to be unfriendly or hostile.
Secondly
, men and women who participate in sports
such
 as football or tennis are often seen as role models for adolescents.
Hence
 their manners will affect or influence others. A good illustration of
this
 is Neymar who is an international football star. One time at a very successful game he shouted at his tribe members in front of the crowd. He used various curse words. After the
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game many parents complained that their children started to curse more often than before.
Hence
 were impolite. I believe that
for instance
 football stars like Neymar should take care of their words.
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 it would be beneficial if they influence offspring in a good and respectful way. In ,
conclusion
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 I believe, that individuals who are involved in exercise/ sports need to be respectful and kind towards each other, not only because
this
 is a necessity for a healthy Team, but
also
 because those people are role models for youngsters.
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