Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent to you agree with this? How do you think space explonation will change in the future?
National dignity is said to be more important than global achievement in
Replace the word
spatial
space
analysis. I agree with the statement as space
exploration
is extremely impactful for national matters. In the future, the expedition towards space
will become more massive.
To start with, space
exploration
is mostly conducted by NASA, a space
organization that contributes to the global world. Most of their research includes sending astronauts to observe outer space
. It is essential for a country to conduct their own exploration
. For example
, Indonesia has its own national institute of space
that is
responsible for the space
’s related studies. Moreover
, Indonesia has its own satellite named Palapa that is
used to maintain the signal for communication. More than that, the satellite can detect a disaster situation and capture its location. As an Indonesian, I am proud of what Indonesia has done in regard to space
exploration
.
Another factor to consider is massive space
exploration
is likely to happen in the future. It is possible for some living beings, such
as plants, to be planted on the other planet to test the planet’s condition and its possibility to be lived by humans. With a high level of technology, the researcher will receive the signal sent by the plant faster, which might lead to some conclusions in regard to the planet’s situation. Thus
, there might be a time when the earth is not the only planet that could be lived on.
In conclusion, research related to outer space
is undeniably essential for the national scope and there is a prediction that there will be a huge breakthrough by keeping living things in space
as exploration
in the future.Submitted by amiablesheru on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite