In some countries, governments encourage business to move outside of the cities to solve the problems of housing and transport in cities. What are advantages and disadvantages?

In some countries, governments plead

companies

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to move to the suburbs.

This

approach should serve the cities to solve issues of housing and transport. In

this

disquisition ,I will emphasize both pros and cons and state my opinion in the conclusion.

First

and foremost, a favour of

this

approach is the reduction of renting fees and the decrease in

traffic

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jam

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. The reason for

this

is that more availability in real estate leads to a cut in housing and

renting

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costs.

That is

due to high demand rates

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for dramatically high prices.

Moreover

diminishing tuitions results in more equality between the rich and poor.

As a result

individuals with

fewer

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money are able to afford the rent without taking high credits.

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a healthier society is created. In ,addition fewer cars exist in the cities

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less traffic. A good illustration for

this

is a study made in NYC which illustrated that citizens who lived in suburbs or in areas which were outside the centre, had lower stress levels than new Yorkers. Regarding the disadvantages, men and women require a longer time by car to get to their occupations.

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of

this

are that many suburbs are quite far away from the centre.

This

on the other hand

leads to environmental problems.

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, long distances by car require more fuel and release multiple greenhouse gases

such

as Co2 job.

This

is incredibly harmful to the planet and its inhabitants. In conclusion, I opine that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because even though fewer rents will lead to more equality and less traffic to a decline in stress rates, our planet is dramatically endangered and we need to prevent anything which will cause more harm. Because in the long run

this

will affect our children way more and their smallest issues will be renting fees.