Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
In the recent modern world, the number of people who focus on
the
environmental issues has been increasing. One of the often argued issues in the context of Correct article usage
apply
this
environmental
friendly mindset is to reduce excessive merchandise packages. On Change the word
environmentally
this
account, some people argue that Add a hyphen
over-packaging
over packaging
is the responsibility of end users, while others believe providers of products are accountable. I believe Add a hyphen
over-packaging
the
both share the responsibility, Correct your spelling
they
however
, end-user
mindset should be changed Add an article
the end-user
first
to fundamentally solve this
critical issue.
The first
reason that consumers are more accountable for this
problem is that as long as purchasers require many layers of packing, the producer need
to respond Change the verb form
needs
them
in order to sell products. Change preposition
to them
For example
, at counters of department stores, buyers are asked if they needed an
extra wrapping or Correct article usage
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extra
bag. When they say yes to the question, the shop staff cannot deny Correct article usage
an extra
and
is required to add one more packaging. Correct pronoun usage
it and
This
is why, often times
, customers have the lever to decide if over packages could be avoided or not.
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oftentimes
second
reason why end-users are accountable is that
their cultural habit of giving gifts to friends and relatives. Correct word choice
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For example
, in Japan, we have been having a long history of offering beautifully wrapped presents. Unlike some western cultures, wrapping papers and clothes are
highly valued. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Such
society
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a society
need
to somehow shift citizens' mindset under the recent circumstances. Without that fundamental change Change the verb form
needs
of
people, Change preposition
in
this
critical issue cannot be avoided in the future.
In conclusion, to reduce over packaged
products, I believe consumers should start actions Add a hyphen
over-packaged
first
, by changing their gift giving
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gift-giving
habit
and Fix the agreement mistake
habits
stop
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stopping
extra
packaging at shop counters. By doing so, product makers can reduce Change preposition
for extra
cost
of packaging and eventually can contribute to Add an article
the cost
the
environmental problems.Correct article usage
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite