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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

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Now
people
 used to sleep less than they slept earlier. I think the main reason is
faster
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the faster
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 rhythm of life. It most of all affects the person himself because of the worse
health
 quality and productivity.
Firstly
people
 used to sleep less with each decade because of
faster
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 life rhythm.
Moreover
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 humanity started to depreciate sleep time.
People
 have to
work
 more in view of the fact that global prices increases. Because of
this
,
people
 have to get up earlier in order to get to
work
 because every year the level of traffic on the roads only
rise
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 up. Another thing is evening traffic
further
hold
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people
 on the road, so they get home later. Whereas
people
 who have small children have
harder
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a harder
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 time, because
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the
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they
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 need to monitor the baby’s mood. It is
also
 a very common trend to
work
 part-time at night, so
people
 have to sleep several hours per day.  The main effect of poor sleep brings pressure on your
health
, productivity, and mood. The worsts impact is on
health
.
Moreover
, with
health
 problems
people
visits
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 doctors more often, which
also
 affects the amount of sleep. The
less
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people
 rest at night, the more tired humans become.
As a result
,
humanity
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humanity's
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 productivity goes down, which leads to slow and hard
work
. And that's a reason why
peoples
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people's
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 mood drops and worsens. All
this
 affects the quality of life,
for example
, there are more and more humans with mental illnesses. The
work
 of a psychologist is becoming more and more in demand every year. In conclusion, I can say that most
people
 do not sleep the right amount of time for their
body
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bodies
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.
As a
result
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people
 are increasingly sick.
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