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Some people believe that all companies’ decisions should be decided by managers, while others think that it is better to include employees in decision making. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

#people #companies’ #decisions #managers #employees #decision
In some
company
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companies
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, there
a
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is a
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straigh
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straight
guideline
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guidelines
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 between the rights of
managers
 and
employees
. Only
managers
 can make
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a decision
the decision
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decision
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decisions
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. But
for
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some
company
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companies
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, especially the small or middle
company
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companies
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,
they
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may let their
employees
to
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sit together in the meeting to make
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a decision
the decision
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decision
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decisions
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in
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on
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 different topics. Both
situation
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 have pros and cons in it. For the people who think that all companies'
decision
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decisions
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 should be decided by
managers
, it may
easier
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be easier
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 to lead the
company
 to
the
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success. As the
managers
 have more
experiences
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experience
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on
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in
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 the working aspect, it is easier for them to make the best
decision
 according to their
pass
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past
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 experience.
In addition
, it will be clear for the
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of
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job
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the job
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 as all the
employees
 just need to listen to one voice. It can give a clear direction for what the
employees
 should follow.
However
, for the one who
sit
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 as a manager, he or she may need to bare a high
preeure
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pressure
. If the project
face
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faces
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failiture
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failure
, the manager is the one who
need
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 to bare all the responsibility. Other than that, not all the
employees
 are willing to listen and follow the instruction. They may have their own point of view but not on the same line as the
managers
.
Thus
, it may cause a poor relationship between the
managers
 and the
employees
. But for the
company
 which
include
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employees
 in
decision
 making, it can help train the
employees
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employee's
employees'
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 critical thinking and their skills of
decision
 making.
Moreover
, it can help build the confidence of the
employees
 once their idea
being
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 agreed
by
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upon by
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the
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others.
This
 shows that the
company
 respect
to
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their ideas and
have
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has
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 room to
dicuess
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discuss
 on different topics. It may build a good working
environmnet
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environment
environments
. But, since
emplyees
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employees
has
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have
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 less working experience than
managers
, it may
eaily
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easily
 cause
to
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failiture
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failure
.
Managers
 still need to bare the responsibility once
his
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their
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teammember
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team member
team members
 have
got
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gotten
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 into
troubles
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trouble
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. For both
side
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sides
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, there are pros and cons for the
company
. In my opinion, I think that it will be better for the
company
include
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to include
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employees
 in
decision making
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decision-making
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.
For
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Me
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me
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, I like to express my point of view
in
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on
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 different topics. It will be better for me if I can express my point of view
in
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to
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 the
company
. So, I think it is better to include
employees
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employees'
employee's
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 ideas in
decision making
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decision-making
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.
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