Some people believe that all companies’ decisions should be decided by managers, while others think that it is better to include employees in decision making. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In some
company
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, there
a
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straigh
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straight
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guidelines
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between the rights of
managers
and
employees
. Only
managers
can make
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a decision
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decision
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decisions
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. But
for
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some
company
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companies
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, especially the small or middle
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companies
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,
they
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may let their
employees
to
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sit together in the meeting to make
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a decision
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decision
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decisions
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in
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different topics. Both
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have pros and cons in it. For the people who think that all companies'
decision
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decisions
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should be decided by
managers
, it may
easier
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be easier
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to lead the
company
to
the
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success. As the
managers
have more
experiences
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experience
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on
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the working aspect, it is easier for them to make the best
decision
according to their
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experience.
In addition
, it will be clear for the
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of
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job
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the job
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as all the
employees
just need to listen to one voice. It can give a clear direction for what the
employees
should follow.
However
, for the one who
sit
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as a manager, he or she may need to bare a high
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pressure
. If the project
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failiture
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failure
, the manager is the one who
need
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to bare all the responsibility. Other than that, not all the
employees
are willing to listen and follow the instruction. They may have their own point of view but not on the same line as the
managers
.
Thus
, it may cause a poor relationship between the
managers
and the
employees
. But for the
company
which
include
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employees
in
decision
making, it can help train the
employees
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employee's
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critical thinking and their skills of
decision
making.
Moreover
, it can help build the confidence of the
employees
once their idea
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agreed
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upon by
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the
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others.
This
shows that the
company
respect
to
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their ideas and
have
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has
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room to
dicuess
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discuss
on different topics. It may build a good working
environmnet
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environment
environments
. But, since
emplyees
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employees
has
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less working experience than
managers
, it may
eaily
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easily
cause
to
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failiture
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failure
.
Managers
still need to bare the responsibility once
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their
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teammember
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team member
team members
have
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into
troubles
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trouble
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. For both
side
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sides
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, there are pros and cons for the
company
. In my opinion, I think that it will be better for the
company
include
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employees
in
decision making
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decision-making
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.
For
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me
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, I like to express my point of view
in
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different topics. It will be better for me if I can express my point of view
in
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to
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the
company
. So, I think it is better to include
employees
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employees'
employee's
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ideas in
decision making
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decision-making
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.
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