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Some people believe that climate effects the person’s way of life while other believe that climate has greater impact on economy of a region. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
this
 global era, global warming brings adverse effects on the
climate
 of the earth across the world. It is assumed by some folks that the change in
climate
 impact the lifestyle of the individual while others think
weather
 condition has immensely affected the economy of a country. In my point of view, the financial status of a society is greatly affected by atmospheric conditions.
To begin
 with, in developing countries
weather
 play a vital role in the living style of people. Societies wholly solely depend on environmental situations. It is to say that, people live their lives and celebrate events
such
 as Basant, and spring festivals to enjoy the
weather
.
For example
, in Pakistan's residential structures, dressing cuisine and social gatherings reflect the intensity of the atmosphere which is quite different from the residence of Murree (a snowy area). So
climate
 not only changes the way of life but
also
 changes the nature and the ethical style of societies.
On the other hand
,
weather
 conditions greatly influence the financial structure of a nation. To be more specific, developing countries rely on agriculture which is directly affected by the
weather
. If the environment does not dramatically change due to global warming, these nations will easily boost their infrastructure by growing crops and vegetables.
For instance
, In Pakistan recently heavy rain caused a devastating flood; crops and vegetables are destroyed in huge sectors. So, the flood not only disturbs the agricultural system of the country but the community is
also
 affected by
this
 disaster. Admittedly, individuals depend on natural resources according to
climate
 but the economy of a region strongly affected society. To exemplify, in Saudi Arabia despite having strong
weather
, its economic growth is stable as compared to developing nations. To conclude, I tend to reiterate
although
 a person’s lifestyle is changed by variations in
climate
, the effects of economic variations seem to be more significant.
Hence
, I assert it has greatest the crucial impact on societies.
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