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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the cost of medical procedures is very expensive, and
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available for many
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, because of
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 each country should have free health services. I mostly agree with
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this
 essay will tell about all the reasons for my opinion. In the
first
 place, the government of every country should think about citizens from low classes, who do not have any opportunities to pay for any medical treatments. If a person who is poor gets sick, he cannot call a simple ambulance because of his low equity, after which he can infect other
people
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, the situation in India,
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has most indicators of diseases caused by
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 poor nature. What is more, it is undeniable that most countries have
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free healthcare.
People
 who want to go to free health clinics, cannot take the same treatments that can give a payable medical place, they are forced to go to these centres and take what they can give.
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 Kazakhstan’s free polyclinics and hospitals, where clients have to serve after lots of waiting,
also
 the workers may not be respectful to them and may not give the necessary services. In conclusion, countries should give free and high-quality healthcare,
also
people
 must not have any expenses when they are receiving medical treatments. It is because of their opportunities,
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why they may not take
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