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Some people think multiple choice tests are better than tests which require you to write an essay. Other people think that tests which require you to write an essay are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some
people
 think that
multiple choice
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tests
 are better than
tests
 that require you to write an
essay
. Either way, both
test
 styles are a huge benefit to different
people
. Choice
tests
 are designed for students to catch a break from all the writing.
This
 is a huge benefit for
people
 whose writing skills are poor so they can study for the
test
 and all they need to do is to choose an answer.
On the other
hand
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 there are
people
 who don'
t
 listen in class and don'
t
 prepare for the
test
. Given a
test
 where students have multiple answers to choose from, if they are lucky they will choose the right one. On the
second
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 hand
tests
 that require writing essays have their one
advantages
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. For
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 you can'
t
 get out of studying because if you don'
t
 prepare for the
test
 you will fail. It is
also
 a good practice for
people
 whose writing skills are not that great. In my
opinion
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 I prefer
tests
 with multiple choices. These
tests
 are a good way to get your grades up and
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 easier than
tests
 that require
essay
 writing but I have no problems with
essay
 writing
tests
 because if you don'
t
 succeed
while
 writing an
essay
 you will see your mistakes and it will make you work more to fill in your gap's.
Overall
 both
test
 variations are good and useful in
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one way and will make good improvements
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 your skills.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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