๐—ฆ๐—ผ๐—บ๐—ฒ ๐—ฝ๐—ฒ๐—ผ๐—ฝ๐—น๐—ฒ ๐—ฏ๐—ฒ๐—น๐—ถ๐—ฒ๐˜ƒ๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฎ๐˜ ๐—ฝ๐—ฟ๐—ผ๐—ณ๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป๐—ฎ๐—น๐˜€ ๐˜€๐˜‚๐—ฐ๐—ต ๐—ฎ๐˜€ ๐—ฑ๐—ผ๐—ฐ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐˜€, ๐—ฒ๐—ป๐—ด๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ฒ๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐˜€ ๐˜€๐—ต๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—น๐—ฑ ๐—ฏ๐—ฒ ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ๐—พ๐˜‚๐—ถ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ๐—ฑ ๐˜๐—ผ ๐˜„๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ธ ๐—ถ๐—ป ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ ๐—ฐ๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—ป๐˜๐—ฟ๐˜† ๐˜„๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐˜† ๐—ฑ๐—ถ๐—ฑ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ถ๐—ฟ ๐˜๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด. ๐—ข๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐˜€ ๐—ฏ๐—ฒ๐—น๐—ถ๐—ฒ๐˜ƒ๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฎ๐˜ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐˜† ๐˜€๐—ต๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—น๐—ฑ ๐—ฏ๐—ฒ ๐—ณ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ผ ๐˜„๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ธ ๐—ถ๐—ป ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ผ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ฟ ๐—ฐ๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—ป๐˜๐—ฟ๐˜† ๐—ถ๐—ณ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐˜† ๐˜„๐—ถ๐˜€๐—ต. ๐——๐—ถ๐˜€๐—ฐ๐˜‚๐˜€๐˜€ ๐—ฏ๐—ผ๐˜๐—ต ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ๐˜€๐—ฒ ๐˜ƒ๐—ถ๐—ฒ๐˜„๐˜€ ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ฑ ๐—ด๐—ถ๐˜ƒ๐—ฒ ๐˜†๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—ฟ ๐—ผ๐˜„๐—ป ๐—ผ๐—ฝ๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป.

It is often argued that highly skilled professionals
such
as doctors and engineers should
work
in their state. Others opine that there shouldn't be any barriers to their workspace. In my point of view, it's not that easy to support on point. Despite that, I am in
favor
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of the latter notion. First of all, these kinds of professions are
highly
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demanded
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all over the world. If someone gets a degree in these sectors he should
work
where
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he got it. Because he has the responsibility to provide his or her knowledge to the
country
.
For instance
, if a doctor doesn't help his inhabitants
then
it would be unjustified for them. The priority is always for the
own
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country
. Talking about the next portion, there is no border to
work
in
this
era of modern science. Everyone can
work
everywhere, wherever they want. A lot of countries in the world have suffered from many difficulties just for good quality professionals. If someone helps them out with these it will be helpful for them. To explain it, using modern technology doctors can prescribe to people who are from another
country
, and even they don't need to go to that
country
to treat them on some occasions.
Hence
, these activities will make the world a better place to live.
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, it appears that doing
work
as a global person is more acceptable
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than working for just his or her own
country
. Improvement of communication systems is easier to support all over the globe.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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