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milk

production

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several steps. Overall, the

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cows grazing and finishes

by

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appearing

milk

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milk

production starts

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cow grazing.

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is really important

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because it has an impact on the quality of the

milk

,

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the cows are milked by a milking machine twice a day.

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step is storing

this

milk

in refrigeration storage, where

milk

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increases

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shelf life of the

milk

.

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step is delivering

milk

by tanks to the factory, where all types of dairy are produced. One part of

milk

is pasteurized and packaged, another is used in

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of dairy products

such

as cheese, cream and butter. And

finally

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all

this

dairy stuff appears on the market.