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milk

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production

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several steps. Overall, the

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cows grazing and finishes

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appearing

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in the market. The

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milk

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production starts

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cow grazing.

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is really important

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because it has an impact on the quality of the

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the cows are milked by a milking machine twice a day.

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step is storing

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in refrigeration storage, where

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is becoming cold and

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increases

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shelf life of the

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.

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step is delivering

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by tanks to the factory, where all types of dairy are produced. One part of

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is pasteurized and packaged, another is used in

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of dairy products

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as cheese, cream and butter. And

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finally

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all

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dairy stuff appears on the market.