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Teenagers should have regular exams at secondary school as this will prepare thembetter for life after leaving school. Do you agree or disagree?

#teenagers #exams #school #thembetter #life
The examination is a preponderant feature of school schools and youth should avail
this
 kind of practice to gain rewards in future. I completely agree with
this
 stance and the following paragraph would highlight my perspective which leads to a logical conclusion.
To begin
 with, education plays an integral role in the life of pupils from an early age and assessments enable them to look forward to their progress. Apart from that, a series of evaluations
helps
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 students to improve their literacy rate.
For example
, if a learner practices a huge number of entry tests for enrollment in higher studies, he could easily meet his goal.
Besides
, the testing systems of high schools build great confidence in their
knowledge
 gainer to perform extraordinarily in their admission test for higher studies. Like, if a student gets full marks
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practice
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a practice
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test
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, he has built the confidence to perform well in
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 exam.
Moreover
, assessing pupils on daily basis helps them to enhance their general
knowledge
 and common sense which is very helpful for public dealing in future.
For instance
, the portion of general
knowledge
 in entry tests
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 the literacy rate of learners and
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 them to improve in
this
 area. To recapitulate, because of the aforementioned, it is crystal clear that the evaluation system of secondary school boosts the
knowledge
 of students and prepares them for their future life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discipline
  • resilience
  • consistent
  • preparation
  • evaluate
  • mastery
  • instruction
  • structured
  • evaluative
  • workforce
  • perform under pressure
  • deadlines
  • stressful
  • time management
  • competitive spirit
  • motivate
  • excel
  • continuous assessment
  • detrimental
  • balanced approach
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