Grades encourage students to work harder at school. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

A lot of people claim that

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on tests encourage

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to learn. I agree with

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because examinations are a good way for a

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to review what they have learned;

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scores are a standard measurement of

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' learning

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and knowledge level, and the

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system can benefit

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' future.

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of all, tests are important for

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learning. Attending classes is not enough for

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to learn the subjects no matter how carefully they listen to what the

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say. They need examinations to review the lessons. In most cases, grades or

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are the only means by which

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measure

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' learning

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and learning progress.

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, grades encourage

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to study for examinations, and it is a good system for

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to learn.

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,

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scores are standard measurements of

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' learning

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and knowledge level. Most people would agree with

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universities all over the world take

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results as a standard measurement to give admission to new

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, to offer fellowships, and to decide whether to grant a

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graduation. High school

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use

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results as a means to evaluate the effects of teaching, and

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' learning progress. By

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scores,

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know each individual

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's

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to learn.

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,

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results can stimulate a

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to

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hard on his courses. The testing mechanism encourages

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to

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hard in order to achieve a better result; they will devote more time to study and develop a "never give up" spirit.

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will not only benefit their study but

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teach them the truth, that everyone needs constant learning and hard

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in order to be useful to

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society.

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who have developed

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learning habits and never give up nature will not only have good performance at school but can

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be superior to others in other aspects;

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natures are important factors even after finishing school. I believe most

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understand the importance of these qualities and their impacts on their life;

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they know how important it is to

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hard and try to achieve a better score. In conclusion,

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can stimulate

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to learn, and good

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can give them advantages in going to a good university and finding a good job.

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I strongly support the statement that

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can encourage

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to learn.