The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.

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speaking
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language
has become popular in the world because of the contribution of developing tourism. Other people
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it is leading to only
one
language
will be spoken worldwide. It eases migration and no more communication
barrier
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but there
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also
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drawback
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to be taken
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consideration.
Fristly
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Firstly
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.
one
benefit of
one
spoken
language
is that it facilitates migration.
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of the reasons why some professionals from
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English
countries, deter them to migrate abroad
and
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practise their profession in the country they dreamed off because of difficulty in speaking in
English
.
for example
,
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to migrate in US, Canada and Uk applicants should
passed
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the
English
requirements, Which is a tough task for those
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english
speaker.
Secondly
.Having
one
dialect is advantageous owing to makes easy
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to
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express yourself,
ideas
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and ideas
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to someone.
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, being a tourist guide, fluency in
English
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the English
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language
must bestow especially if tourists are From abroad.
Thirdly
,
one
language
will make job
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easier.being interviewed is truly nerve-racking especially if your mother tongue
in
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not
English
.
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will be able to
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the question and
aswer
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answer
it correctly without
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as it
speak
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same
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Language
.
On the other hand
.
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problem with
one
dialect its
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the minor subject . Children
failes
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failed
to learn and speak the native
language
of their parents
as a result
of
English
becomo
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become
dominant
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the dominant
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lamguage
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language
in their house.
for instance
, children grow up abroad. Another possible issue
employement
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employment
will be affected.
Teachinv
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Teaching
English
thru online
class
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classes
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has
becoming
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popular
now adays
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nowadays
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and it's another source of income
of
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for
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some people.
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,
English
teacher
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teachers
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are high demand and
well- paid
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internationally
such
as in
middle
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east , China and South
korea
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. In conclusion. While some can benefit if
English
will be the only spoken
language
. It can
be
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also
leading
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to unemployment and loss
cultural
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of cultural
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identity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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