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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#governments #progress #people #country
In the present era, nothing goes without saying that economic
progress
 is the most important task to be achieved by
the
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governments. Some
people
 hold the opinion that
besides
economy
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, many other types of
progress
 should
also
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to
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 the mainstream goals of a
country
. In
this
 essay, I intend to delve into both of these views and give my own opinion.
Economy
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 is the backbone of a
country
's
progress
. The public's needs and demands considerably depend on the economic status of the
country
.
For instance
, in Pakistan, more than 60
percent
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 of the population is below the poverty line. The lower
middle class
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people
 lack
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basic facilities like electricity,
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 access to water and gas supply. The
country
 is in debt as it has taken heavy loans in order to fulfil
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 needs. The value of
currency
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a currency
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 is getting relegated with every passing day. Let alone Pakistan, every county is facing serious economic issues that need to be rectified. The prosperity of a
country
 is prominently dependent on its economic growth.
On the contrary
,
people
 opine that other kinds of
progress
 have the same massive role as
the
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economic
progress
. The
first
 and
the
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foremost class of
progress
that is
 important is the ''educational and literacy rate''. A smart, hardworking, talented,
master mind
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 nation is the key to a county's success. Another field in which
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progress
 is needed is the ''Human development and condemnation
on
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 racism''.
For example
, in
USA
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,
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black
people
 are still judged for their skin complexion, massive fish lips and dreadlocks.
Although
 the blacks are in power, they are literate and are running huge businesses in order to enhance
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economy
,
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racism still is an obstacle to them. To put
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 a nutshell, I pen down saying that
although
country's
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a country's
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 economic growth is as important as oxygen to a human, the
progress
 in education and social
ethical
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and ethical
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 values outweigh the pros of
economy
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the economy
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.
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