Some people feel that entertainers (eg film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Entertainment
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industry has one of the
highest paying
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jobs in the
world
, and because of
that
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a few
people
have a view that
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celebrities don't deserve to be paid too much
money
. I would completely disagree with that viewpoint, as they have worked hard to get
the
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fame and
money
but other occupations
such
as
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teacher
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teachers
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and
scientist
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scientists
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should
aslo
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also
be paid
high
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a high
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amount
of salary. Show business is tough and the success rate is extremely slim. There is
high
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a high
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amount
of competition and you need to have extraordinary skills to be successful. Entertainers work long
hours
to perfect their skills and enhance their talent and because of that, they are paid
huge
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a huge
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sum
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sums
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of
money
.
For example
, famous cricketer, Virat Kohli spends 8
hours
a day training in the field and
then
2
hours
in the gym to make sure he can perform for his country, which is a tiresome process, and because of
that
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he is the best cricketer in the
world
. So, when someone works hard to reach that top level in their field, they deserve all the fame and
money
.
However
, there are several other jobs which
needs
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to get paid high as it makes a difference in the
world
. Teachers and researchers
,
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spends
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majority
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the majority
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of their life to make
this
world
a better place, and due to that, they should be paid higher than their current pay.
For instance
, scientists created a vaccine for
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corona virus
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coronavirus
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in 8 months but they did not get the deserved recognition and
money
.
People
, who work long
hours
, to improve
our
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life should be paid equally to entertainers. In conclusion,
people
in
entertainment
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the entertainment
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business earn a huge
amount
of
money
, due to their talents and skills
but
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, the
people
in educational and research organizations should
also
get
equal
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an equal
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amount
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amounts
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of pay for creating a difference in
common
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the common
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man's life.
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