These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Contemporary electronic devices
such
as computers and telephones are providing much convenience for a mass of people nowadays, which enables them to finish their work easily at
home
.
However
, there are both pros and cons
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doing jobs domestically. In
this
essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of working at
home
, and I am convinced that there are certain drawbacks that working at
home
certainly could not overcome.
First
of all, it is obviously clear that working at
home
could substantially save
your
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time
by eliminating the
time
used for commuting. A good illustration of
this
could be the daily routines of
workers
in
metropolis
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such
as Beijing, who have got little money to purchase
the
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residence near their working places and have to commute for one or two hours from their rented apartments in
suburb
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areas. A large sum of
time
could be saved if the boss agrees that
workers
can work at
home
. In general, it is saving
time
that makes working at
home
so appealing and advantageous.
However
, certain drawbacks should be seriously considered as well.
Firstly
, if the job should be done
at
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a specialised area with necessary machines or raw materials,
then
no way can the
workers
do their jobs at their homes with almost nothing.
For example
, if you are a worker at an automobile factory,
then
it is impossible to manufacture a car on your own.
Besides
, due to safety reasons, certain regulations should be observed and
workers
need to be surveilled sometimes, which is hard to conduct at
home
.
For instance
, if you are a worker in the chemical engineering industry, the chemicals you utilise might be so toxic and dangerous that slightly more contact would put your health in jeopardy, not to mention that there are so many foods and drinks that are readily contaminated at
home
. To sum up, lack of specialised devices and safety reasons could be two main disadvantages of working at
home
. To conclude, after taking everything into consideration, the drawbacks of working at
home
are more significant at present as far as I am concerned. But I suppose society would find its path to elevate the general working efficiency in the future, so we would not be bothered to worry about working at
home
or not
then
.
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