Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter ● state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this ● give details of how you have benefited from the club ● explain why you want to leave

Dear Mr Patel, Greetings of the day! I am writing
this
letter to notify you about
termination
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of my
club
membership
at the Babylon
Club
. I have
the
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a
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Platinum
membership
at your
club
located in the science city area for which I paid through online banking earlier
this
year
. My
membership
number is AK567267G5. I got
this
membership
mainly for recreational and sports
acitivities
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activities
at the
club
which was extensively used by me and my family members. My son really enjoyed
particpating
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participating
in various events organized by the
club
throughout the
year
while
also
winning the men's
single
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singles
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tennis championship in the
under 12
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age group.
This
practice and exposure
has
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helped him advance in the tennis sport in his school, allowing him the opportunity to represent his school at the
state level
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tournament. My wife was actively involved in the morning yoga classes and I used the gym area during that time to get my workout in. We are relocating our residence to Gandhinagar city early
next
year
due to personal reasons. Owing to
longer
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commuting distance between the Babylon
Club
and our new residence we cannot continue with your service.
Hence
, we have decided to cancel our
membership
in December
this
year
. Yours Sincerely, Mr Darshit Nimavat
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual membership
  • monthly subscription
  • premium membership
  • direct debit
  • credit card payment
  • exclusive events
  • state-of-the-art facilities
  • networking opportunities
  • relocation
  • financial constraints
  • diversifying interests
  • expressing gratitude
  • amicable departure
  • future correspondence
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