International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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International
touristry
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is
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of the main sources of generating income for the state. It affects a
country
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in many ways. In my opinion, I believe that the advantage of international tourism outweighs the drawback.
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essay, I will explore both aspects with examples. On the
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hand, some people believe international
touristry
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has brought enormous benefits to many
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. There is some thought in that. Because it brings various benefits to a
country
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.
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of the most preponderant ones is that foreign exchange is provided to the
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.
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, there are so many countries that depend on the travel industry.
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as Molduce, Italy,Spain,France,Greece and Australia.
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,
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helps famous countries' history throughout the world.
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happen some
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country
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have become world heritage. Like, in our
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Sigiriya. And
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touristry
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helps
touristry
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-related businesses.
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as small shops situated in
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field
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, hotels, boat riders etc... And
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it provides so many job opportunities.
On the other hand
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, critics may point out that,
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of the most significant drawbacks of
touristry
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is environmental pollution. Sometimes
touristry
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is the reason for polluting some action
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.
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as putting some garbage, cultural division and air pollution ( using vehicles). There lack
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disadvantages to
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. To sum up,
touristry
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is a good industry for countries. There is a lack of drawbacks to
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. But we can find a good solution to that
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. In view of the argument outlined above,
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can conclude that despite having some drawbacks the benefits of international
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in society are ignorable.
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