Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree? What is your opinion?

Individuals go through many phases in their life as they grow up and reach a certain age. Each person is unique and has his or her own
character
traits which are influenced by many genetic factors as well as numerous other factors. Some
people
are of the view that the characters and personalities of
people
are solely dependent on our
genes
and
such
inherited characteristics cannot be changed. I partially disagree with
this
statement as to some extent
genes
have control over our behaviour whereas the lifestyle and the nature of upbringing a person experiences play a major role in their
character
development.
This
will be elaborated on in the forthcoming paragraphs.
First
and foremost, An individual experiences many good and bad things throughout his or her life. These have a huge impact on their mind and
hence
the person shapes his thoughts and way of living in terms of what he or she has experienced and learnt till that point.
For example
, Many studies have proved that A tiger taken away from its normal habitat and raised like a pet, by not surviving on rough grounds develops a sense of love and compassion for humans and does not harm them as well as other animals.
This
is similar to the case of humans. If an individual is raised and bought up in positive and good situations ,no matter, what negative characteristics he possesses cannot be identified and utilised as he adapts to the situation which is familiar to him.
Secondly
, the environment and
people
around whom an individual grows up greatly impact his or her personality and
character
.
For instance
, children raised by strict parents find it a little hard to open up and have introverted personalities as compared to kids of broad-minded parents.
However
, the
genes
of an individual cannot be completely neglected as they play a trivial role in shaping his or her
character
.
For example
, By ,birth some children may be criminal-minded and no matter what good lessons they learn they end up as criminals . Many
people
state that
this
is in their
genes
and cannot be changed. In conclusion, even though
genes
play a minor role in determining the personalities of individuals, the type of environment and the situation in which they are raised are consequential in determining the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • predetermined
  • character traits
  • genetic influence
  • environmental factors
  • personality development
  • upbringing
  • foundation
  • evolution of traits
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