Government should spend money on railways rather than Road. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Nowadays, there are various projects which are being handled by the
government
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. It is often argued that executives should spend more
money
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towards building
railways
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rather than roads. In
further
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paragraphs, I would be shedding some light on the following purposes that should be considered
which
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when
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spending their currency. To commence with, I believe that authorities should indulge their cash in
a
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an
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activity which gives profit in return as
construct
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constructing
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railway
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tracks.
One
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of the greatest advantages that would be received by the
people
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that
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is that
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transportation services would get increase and individuals will spend less
time
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to travel
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travelling
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from
one
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place to another.
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, masses would take just
couple
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of hours to visit or cover long-distance places.
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, it would boost the facility of the town.
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, if the legislative bodies would spend their
time
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and funds on
railways
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then
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there are more
chances
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that
people
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would get
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the employee
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employee
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employees
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on
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in
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various
posts
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such
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as ticket collector and so on. To elaborate, if the
railway
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system would manufacture, the
rate
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of
employment
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and literacy would
also
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rise. To illustrate, according to the survey conducted by the chief minister of Uttarakhand, there are 75,00,00
people
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who are working in
Railways
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on
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in
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different
posts
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.
As a result
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, the
chances
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for unemployment would get reduced and every person would involve in certain
kind
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kinds
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of work, resulting in, the
poverty
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rate
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would decline. To conclude, I am firmly convinced by the view that the
government
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should expand the
railway
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as it
promote
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promotes
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the
employment
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rate
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and
lead
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leads
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the city towards modernisation. No
one
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would be a sufferer of
poverty
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and each
one
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of us would have
a
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the
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means to earn
money
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.Nowadays, there are various projects which are being handled by the
government
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. It is often argued that executives should spend more
money
Use synonyms
towards building
railways
Use synonyms
rather than roads. In
further
Linking Words
paragraphs, I would be shedding some light on the following purposes that should be considered
which
Correct word choice
when
show examples
spending their currency. To commence with, I believe that authorities should indulge their cash in
a
Change the article
an
show examples
activity which gives profit in return as
construct
Wrong verb form
constructing
show examples
railway
Use synonyms
tracks.
One
Use synonyms
of the greatest advantages that would be received by the
people
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that
Add a missing verb
is that
show examples
transportation services would get increase and individuals will spend less
time
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to travel
Change the verb form
travelling
show examples
from
one
Use synonyms
place to another.
For example
Linking Words
, masses would take just
couple
Change the article
a couple
show examples
of hours to visit or cover long-distance places.
Consequently
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, it would boost the facility of the town.
Additionally
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, if the legislative bodies would spend their
time
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and funds on
railways
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then
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there are more
chances
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that
people
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would get
Add an article
the employee
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employee
Fix the agreement mistake
employees
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on
Change preposition
in
show examples
various
posts
Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
as ticket collector and so on. To elaborate, if the
railway
Use synonyms
system would manufacture, the
rate
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of
employment
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and literacy would
also
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rise. To illustrate, according to the survey conducted by the chief minister of Uttarakhand, there are 75,00,00
people
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who are working in
Railways
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on
Change preposition
in
show examples
different
posts
Use synonyms
.
As a result
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, the
chances
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for unemployment would get reduced and every person would involve in certain
kind
Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
show examples
of work, resulting in, the
poverty
Use synonyms
rate
Use synonyms
would decline. To conclude, I am firmly convinced by the view that the
government
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should expand the
railway
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as it
promote
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promotes
show examples
the
employment
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rate
Use synonyms
and
lead
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leads
show examples
the city towards modernisation. No
one
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would be a sufferer of
poverty
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and each
one
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of us would have
a
Change the article
the
show examples
means to earn
money
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.
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