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Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?

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Today’s
people
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 do not understand how majority
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 natural
world
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, because they
have
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 not enough
knowledge
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 about
nature
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, but humans can learn it
thanks
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 to educational establishments.
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the reason
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reason
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reasons
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of
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why
people
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 do not know enough about
earth
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the earth
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 and how
people
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 can
getting
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 information
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about
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world
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the world
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.
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’s education about the
world
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. A large number of
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 have
not
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knowledge
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, because they have
not
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motivation
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the motivation
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for
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 study and
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are interesting
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interesting
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about
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in
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the
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nature
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. For
this
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reason
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 humans do not
to
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care about the
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 and do not know problems by type for air pollution, melting glaciers, factory emissions and water contamination.
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schools and universities
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have
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 a geography subject and teaching to students, but not all students
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this
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 subject, it is the main problem of
people
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, because they should save their planet
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from
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 problems.
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,
people
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 can explore
about
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the
world
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thanks
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 to articles, news, newspapers and books. There are says a lot about worlds and humans getting information. If they have
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for
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, they may help to earth and make an effort to save
planet
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the planet
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.
By
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 these
things
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 a great number of
people
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 can become
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lifeguards
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 for
the
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nature
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 by type
oceans
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of oceans
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, sea, rivers and forests.
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, nowadays have
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an organization
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organization
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organizations
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 of volunteers. There are many different types
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of helping
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 to the
world
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, and
people
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 can join at any time.
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, in my experience,
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 worked with
people
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 who wanted to help
to
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their planet
thanks
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 to plants and take out the trash. In conclusion, a lot of
people
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 do not have well
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 about
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world
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, and
thanks
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 to schools and universities can get gain
knowledge
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 about
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nature
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 and animals.
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