Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world ,

sports

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are one of the most important factors which

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cannot ignore. Many

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are so interested in certain

sports

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that they want to be professional

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sport

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players

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. One of the reasons

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this

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is that

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professional

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professionals

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are highly paid,

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with other careers.

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some

people

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think that

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is not fair, they ,in my opinion, deserve

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salary because of their responsibilities, their risk ,and their

working

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duration.

Players

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have to comply with several strict regimes.

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of all, they have to keep

practicing

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every day even on holidays ,

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as Christmas or New year.

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, they are not free to live or visit somewhere

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which they want , for they must go to specific training or competing places that their teams decide.

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, since they have to be always fit, they are not allowed to eat anything they want like other

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.

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, Robinho ,the popular

brasilian

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Brazilian

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football player, was charged with visiting his hometown during a training period.

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denoted how strict regimes were. Apart from those responsibilities, professional

players

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are more likely to be injured than other careers. As the strength of bodies is indispensable for

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, some

players

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exert their power more than

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limit.

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, they often stop working for a while.

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, some

sports

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,

such

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as football , rugby ,or basketball, frequently bring about

crash

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between

players

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, making them injured more easily.

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,

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Eduardo

Da Silva ,

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Arsenal’s

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football star, crashed with his opponent so forcefully that his leg broke. He had been cured for a year before coming back to

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field. Most importantly , high payment is reasonable for the

professional

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because their work duration is much shorter than other

occupation’s

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occupations

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. Since their bodies have limited time to work, most

players

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have an opportunity to play

only

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for only

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10-15 years ,which means they may not have jobs

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the rest of their lives.

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, if we compare all

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in their lives with others , it is approximately equal. Unfortunately, if some

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are seriously injured , they have to quit their jobs before other

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. According to the statistics , only a tenth of professional

players

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can continue working in related jobs ,

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as

coachs

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coaches

or managers .

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, they tend to be unemployed after playing to some extent. In conclusion, professional

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sport

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players

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deserve high

payment

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because they have to conform to many strict regimes , they can be injured more easily than

other

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careers, and they frequently have a chance to work no more than 20 years. In my viewpoint,

high

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salary is very important to

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sport

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development. Due to high payment, more and more

people

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will practice and develop new

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sport

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skills, hoping to be

parts

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of these

people

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.