Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world ,

sports

are one of the most important factors which

people

cannot ignore. Many

people

are so interested in certain

sports

that they want to be professional

sport

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players

. One of the reasons

of

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this

is that

the

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professional

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are highly paid,

comparing

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with other careers.

Although

some

people

think that

this

is not fair, they ,in my opinion, deserve

high

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salary because of their responsibilities, their risk ,and their

working

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duration.

Players

have to comply with several strict regimes.

First

of all, they have to keep

practicing

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every day even on holidays ,

such

as Christmas or New year.

Moreover

, they are not free to live or visit somewhere

to

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which they want , for they must go to specific training or competing places that their teams decide.

Furthermore

, since they have to be always fit, they are not allowed to eat anything they want like other

people

.

For example

, Robinho ,the popular

brasilian

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Brazilian

Brasilian

football player, was charged with visiting his hometown during a training period.

This

denoted how strict regimes were. Apart from those responsibilities, professional

players

are more likely to be injured than other careers. As the strength of bodies is indispensable for

sports

, some

players

exert their power more than

bodies’

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limit.

Therefore

, they often stop working for a while.

In addition

, some

sports

,

such

as football , rugby ,or basketball, frequently bring about

crash

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between

players

, making them injured more easily.

For instance

,

Eduado

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Eduardo

Da Silva ,

the

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Arsenal’s

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Arsenal

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football star, crashed with his opponent so forcefully that his leg broke. He had been cured for a year before coming back to

a

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field. Most importantly , high payment is reasonable for the

professional

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professionals

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because their work duration is much shorter than other

occupation’s

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occupations

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. Since their bodies have limited time to work, most

players

have an opportunity to play

only

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10-15 years ,which means they may not have jobs

in

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the rest of their lives.

Thus

, if we compare all

salary

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in their lives with others , it is approximately equal. Unfortunately, if some

players

are seriously injured , they have to quit their jobs before other

players

. According to the statistics , only a tenth of professional

players

can continue working in related jobs ,

such

as

coachs

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coaches

or managers .

In other words

, they tend to be unemployed after playing to some extent. In conclusion, professional

sport

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players

deserve high

payment

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because they have to conform to many strict regimes , they can be injured more easily than

other

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careers, and they frequently have a chance to work no more than 20 years. In my viewpoint,

high

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salary is very important to

sport

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development. Due to high payment, more and more

people

will practice and develop new

sport

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skills, hoping to be

parts

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of these

people

.