At the present time,the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults , compared with the number of older people. Do the advantges of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the current world, there are some

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whose

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is skewed to younger generations,

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as Saudi Arabia and some African

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, whereas most of the developed

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, particularly in Asia, have

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larger number of older citizens. There are both pros and cons to

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younger adults ratio,

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I believe its merits outnumber the demerits. The most prominent disadvantage of having many young citizens is the

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instability

of society and a lack of lucrative tax income.

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people, younger men and women tend to be more rebellious to the established rules and traditions.

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, governments need to carefully take care of them to avoid social turmoils.

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income they can earn is not much compared to the older citizens, the tax income the government can expect is often not enough to make

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fully satisfied. These are the few major drawbacks.

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, there are many significant

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for younger populated

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.

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of all, they are the power to grow the nation.

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even if they were currently not wealthy, the sheer number of young

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promises a potential purchasing power growth in the future. Global brands tend to invest in places where the young

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is abundant,

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of in some developed

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where only the

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above 50 years old is

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dominant

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merit is its flexibility and adaptability to new technologies. Young people have

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adjustment ability to

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new technologies and that can be the leading energy to develop the country. As those important merits are so significant for the nation, the

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drawbacks are outweighed. In conclusion, having

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young

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has both

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and drawbacks,

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, as the

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are quite significant, if the government can correctly manage their demands and treat the financial issues properly, the

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of the situation much

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outweighs

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the disadvantages.