Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the recent modern world, some people seriously believe that it is better for society to destroy aged

buidings

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buildings

and construct new premises. I completely disagree with

this

idea as I believe the traditional constructions and historical

houses

are an important part of human heritage.

In addition

, refurbishing

architectures

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and continue using them is better for the environment. The

first

reason I am

agaist

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against

destorying

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destroying

all the old buildings is

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damage to human heritage. The traditional

architetures

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architectures

architecture

are important parts of society's history and we can learn many things from them.

For example

, the devastating news of

Nortre

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Notre

Dame Cathedral being burnt down shocked people all over the world for the significant loss of human history. Even much smaller cases would, in total, become critical damages to protect our continuing culture. From

this

view, I am

aginst

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the destruction of traditional buildings. The

second

reason I disagree

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statement is from an environmental point of view. On

this

account, unfortunately,

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are infamous for our strong

favor

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to

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of

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purchasing new

houses

intead

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instead

of

second

-hand residences.

As a result

, in Japan,

often times

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good old

houses

are

destoryed

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destroyed

, trees are cut down and new

houses

are built from scratch.

This

process is quite harmful

for

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the environment. If the nation can shift its focus to the conservation of traditional structures rather than wanting to have brand new ones, the waste from the destroyed

houses

would be reduced and trees can survive. From

this

point of view again, I

am strongly oppose

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to

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the statement. In conclusion, protecting old

houses

and passing on

the

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traditional buildings to

next

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a

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generation

have

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plenty of advantages.

Firstly

it means to protect human heritage and

secondly

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the action is environmentally friendly.