Many students now work whilst they are studying in college or university. This often results in them having les time to concentrate on their as well as feelingunder pressure. what are some of the causes of this ? what solutions could you suggest?

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students

have been working and studying at the same time,

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pattern has put a lot of them in a delicate situation

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since they have to earn money as well as

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succeed in their studies,

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essay will discuss the reasons why

this

is happening and put forward several solutions. There are various reasons why both undergraduates and postgraduates

work

while studying,

first

of all, the expensive

fees

,

students

have to pay a big amount of money in order to study a major and to

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in classes in any university.

Moreover

, they have to pay for their accommodations and other facilities,

secondly

, most of them come from middle-class families and it's not possible for them to afford these costly courses, a survey done in several universities

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students

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merely receive any financial help from their families.

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many of them have to

work

to be able to pay off their classes and other related

fees

. An obvious solution is to decrease the highly required

fees

, the government in collaboration with universities' administrations have to

work

towards a solution to lessen these costs,

for example

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government initiates a program to fund

students

' accommodations,

therefore

they will no longer have to pay for

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, there is,

in addition

, one

further

solution to suggest, increasing the number of scholarships and grants offered by colleges, not only it will raise the number of potential candidates wanting to

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there but,

also

applicants will have to study more and more to obtain these opportunities. By reducing these charges

students

will be able to concentrate more on their opted majors and worry less about expenses. To conclude, a likely reason why

students

work

while studying is to pay off the expensive

fees

, a collaboration between

governements

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governments

and universities will put forward

sevral

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several

solutions to

this

problem.