It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, scientists and

travelers

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have opportunities to go to far-away natural surroundings like the South Pole. It is

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my opinion that the cons of

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possibility surpass the pros as

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places put not only the natural

environments

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in danger of

damages

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but

also

individual’s

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lives at threat

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in detail as follows: The primary disadvantage of going to remote natural places is

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environmental detriment.

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is to say that since the untouched beauty of these areas is usually appealing to

travelers

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, it could bring

number

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a number

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of

people

from all over the world to visit

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different

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purpose

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. Albeit the government can hold the power to take concrete actions to control

this

situation,

such

journey play a crucial role in human manipulation

such

as producing garbages, cutting trees, and polluting air and water.

Accordingly

, wildlife would be at threat of

damages

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.

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, distant sites

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a hazard to

people

as well. It means that due to inadequate information and

lack

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of facilities,

people

run the risk of getting hurt or being in

troubles

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of

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unknown factors.

For

instance

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people

might get attacked by kind of animals which never

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warned about or

getting

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lost while there is no

any

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emergency aid.

conversely

, as a benefit, seeing new areas get a chance to travellers to be somewhere they have never been before.

Besides

, in

this

condition, scientists are capable of finding and gathering new data in person considering achievement for them. In spite of these positive points, I am of the opinion that the merits are overshadowed by

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. Overall, while tourists can visit new places and

scientific

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scientists

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can accumulate new information, which is really beneficial, detrimental effects on

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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and

human-beings

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human beings

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is

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more important to consider