*Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. *Why might this be the case? *What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In the recent modern world, the number of young
people
who choose to start their own businesses has been rapidly increasing. There are a couple of important reasons for
this
phenomenon,
such
as the advent of the internet and subsequent
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structure changes.
However
, there are some critical drawbacks of self-employment. I would like to list them in
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essay. The most significant reason for the
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trend is the introduction of the internet and the
digitizaiton
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digitisation
of society. Owning to the
availabity
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availability
of digital
insfrastructure
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infrastructure
at a reasonable cost, even new graduates from universities without much investment money can relatively easily start their own
business
.
For example
, a small
venture
company can compete with
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brand if
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products had a significant competitive edge in the digital market environment. The
second
reason is the volatility of
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society as a whole.
For instance
, under the huge influence of the recent pandemic and the war, the market is becoming more and more unstable and many young
people
are struggling to find good careers at large organizations. Some of these
people
have decided to start their own
buisnesses
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businesses
instead
of depending on established companies. These are a few most prominent reasons.
However
, becoming
self-employers
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has its critical risks.
First
of all, only a small percentage of
venture
businesses
survives
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more than three years. Once failed, the
owners
of the
business
not only
loose
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income but owe a significant amount of investment borrowed from banks and stakeholders.
Moreover
, even if the
business
continued, small
venture
captal
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capital
owners
are constantly under the pressure to continuously grow
business
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.
For instance
, in Japan, 95% of corporations are categorized as small
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and their
owners
tend to work seven days a week, under
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huge pressure and
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is not good for their health. In conclusion, due to the change
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societal
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structure changes, the number of
self-emplyeed
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self-employed
people
are
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continuously increasing.
On the other hand
,
a
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huge growth
of
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the
venture
business
is a rarity and a majority of
venture
company
owners
are facing significant risks and pressures.
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