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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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In recent times, more frequently
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travellers are visiting destinations where the situation is laborious,
for
instance
Sahara
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the Sahara
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 Desert or the Antarctic. There are various advantages as well as side-effects
for
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 travelling
such
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 locations.
This
 phenomenon has its own share of advantages and drawbacks which will be discussed
further
.
to begin
 with, the primary reason why in
present
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senerio
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scenario
tourist
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tourists
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 choose to visit
places
 that are
quiet
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 hard is to be
risk
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a risk
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taker
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takers
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.
as a result
, it expands their horizon and more prone to take steps that let them get out of their
comfortable
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 zone.
secondly
, they love to explore
places
 that are least visited by people. to elaborate,
such
places
 have
low
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a low
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 human
population
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populations
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 and
hence
 they get more connected to
the
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nature.
also
, travelling to these hot spots makes people feel more motivated to expand their world and mindset.
for
instance
,
Sahara
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the Sahara
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 Desert is the place least visited and hard to survive. not only one feels at top of the world but
also
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one also
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connect
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connects
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universe
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spritually
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spiritually
. There
for
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vsiting
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visiting
such
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a destination
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destination
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 helps to grow and expand their
comfortable
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 level. on the other side, travelling to remort areas can have
immerse
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 side effects. one can risk their life to
getting
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 to that
desire
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 location.
for
instance
,
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
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 is a place which is
in
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out of way.
also
, one can experience breathing
problem
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problems
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 with no people around to help.
moreover
, travelling to
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off beat
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offbeat
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location
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locations
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 can result in
difficult
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 for survival.
for
instance
 in
Sahara
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the Sahara
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 desert it is hard to find food as well as shelter.
hence
, its
danger
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 to life to travel
such
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 spots which are not explored by humans. In conclusion, travelling to
places
 which are unknown has positive as well as negative effects. advantages of travelling
such
places
 to
such
location
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locations
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. expands of
horizon
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the horizon
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 as well as becoming a risk taker
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