Today, more and more people use robots to do task at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive o negative development?

In
this
modern era, science and technology
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evolving rapidly. A substantial amount of
people
routinely use machines at
domestic
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and organizational
level
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Although
technology helps human being a lot, it has adverse impacts on society.
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negative
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development in
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paragraph
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People
are losing interest to pursue their chores by themselves. Since
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every individual
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to do any work by others;
consequently
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they engage
third
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party or any materialistic assistance to accomplish their expected job.
For instance
, depending on washing machines, vacuum
cleaner
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and microwave
oven
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etc.
people
are getting familiar
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inclined to
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and
cozy
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lifestyle; recent
utilities
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inventions
instead
of laborious work in their daily chores. A sedentary
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is causing various health issues for individuals. If
people
not
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live a
balance
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life, they will suffer from certain diseases at their primitive age.
For example
, excessive use of mobile phones and gadgets in daily
lives
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results
to
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anxiety, blood pressure and insomnia.
Moreover
,
usage
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of machinery
at
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every field not only changes the
life style
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of
people
but
also
influences on personality and
behavior
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of the contemporary generation. To exemplify, excessive dependence on robotics accessories create impediments
on
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healthy
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and sound biological pattern. So, communities are getting addicted to electronic appliances and exacerbating their health. In conclusion, weighing the above factors, a burgeoning number of
people
continuously use electronic devices at domestic and commercial
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.
As a
result
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predicting
negativity
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the negativity
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of excessive uses
are
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likely to be high with
passage
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of time.
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