Today, more and more people use robots to do task at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive o negative development?
In
this
modern era, science and technology is
evolving rapidly. A substantial amount of Change the verb form
are
people
routinely use machines at domestic
and organizational Add an article
the domestic
a domestic
level
. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Although
technology helps human being a lot, it has adverse impacts on society. This
essay will explicate the advancement of machines as negative
development in Add an article
a negative
subsequent
Add an article
the subsequent
a subsequent
paragraph
.
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paragraphs
People
are losing interest to pursue their chores by themselves. Since,
every individual Remove the comma
apply
desires
to do any work by others; Change to a singular noun
desire
consequently
they engage Add a comma
,consequently
third
party or any materialistic assistance to accomplish their expected job. Add an article
a third
For instance
, depending on washing machines, vacuum cleaner
and microwave Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
oven
etc. Fix the agreement mistake
ovens
people
are getting familiar and
inclined to Change preposition
with and
calm
and Correct article usage
a calm
cozy
lifestyle; recent Change the spelling
cosy
utilities
inventions Change the noun form
utility
instead
of laborious work in their daily chores.
A sedentary life style
is causing various health issues for individuals. If Correct your spelling
lifestyle
people
not
live a Change the verb form
do not
did not
balance
life, they will suffer from certain diseases at their primitive age. Change the verb form
balanced
For example
, excessive use of mobile phones and gadgets in daily lives
results Fix the agreement mistake
life
to
anxiety, blood pressure and insomnia. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, usage
of machinery Correct article usage
the usage
at
every field not only changes the Change preposition
in
life style
of Correct your spelling
lifestyle
people
but also
influences on personality and behavior
of the contemporary generation. To exemplify, excessive dependence on robotics accessories create impediments Change the spelling
behaviour
on
Change preposition
to
healthy
and sound biological pattern. So, communities are getting addicted to electronic appliances and exacerbating their health.
In conclusion, weighing the above factors, a burgeoning number of Add an article
the healthy
a healthy
people
continuously use electronic devices at domestic and commercial level
. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
As a
result
predicting Add a comma
,result
negativity
of excessive uses Correct article usage
the negativity
are
likely to be high with Change the verb form
is
passage
of time.Correct article usage
the passage
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