Today, more and more people use robots to do task at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive o negative development?

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evolving rapidly. A substantial amount of

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routinely use machines at

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technology helps human being a lot, it has adverse impacts on society.

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essay will explicate the advancement of machines as

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development in

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are losing interest to pursue their chores by themselves. Since

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every individual

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to do any work by others;

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consequently

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they engage

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party or any materialistic assistance to accomplish their expected job.

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, depending on washing machines, vacuum

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and microwave

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etc.

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are getting familiar

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inclined to

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lifestyle; recent

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inventions

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of laborious work in their daily chores. A sedentary

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is causing various health issues for individuals. If

people

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live a

balance

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life, they will suffer from certain diseases at their primitive age.

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, excessive use of mobile phones and gadgets in daily

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results

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anxiety, blood pressure and insomnia.

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,

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of machinery

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every field not only changes the

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of

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influences on personality and

behavior

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of the contemporary generation. To exemplify, excessive dependence on robotics accessories create impediments

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healthy

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and sound biological pattern. So, communities are getting addicted to electronic appliances and exacerbating their health. In conclusion, weighing the above factors, a burgeoning number of

people

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continuously use electronic devices at domestic and commercial

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predicting

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of excessive uses

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likely to be high with

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of time.