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One of your neighbor's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car

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Dear Sir or Madam I am going to write
this
 letter to you to complain about your
children
. My name is Sarvinoz. I am your
neighbor
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 who inhabits Sarvinoz close to your home. If I tell you about the problem, my car was left outside one day. Your
children
 came to my house. They were playing with the
children
 in the yard. Suddenly they broke the window of my car. Now I ask you to repair my car. I didn't contact the appropriate places because I thought you might be fined.
Therefore
, repair it yourself. I can
also
 say that you should not yell at your
children
 for
this
. I hope you understand
me
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well and you will solve
this
 problem as soon as possible. With respect From Sarvinoz
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