A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job.

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Dear Sagar, I am doing good, hope you are doing well! I got your letter requesting guidance in finding a

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in the Cincinnati area. I am glad to let you know that we have a relevant

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opportunity at my

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that would be suitable for you. There is an opening for a Design Engineer role at Milacron which involves designing

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Injection Molding Machines for a global market.

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position is within the New Product Development team at my

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and it requires working with 3D modelling software, FEA analysis software, and ERP systems.

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requires some prior design experience within the capital machine manufacturing industry. Given your current working experience with the pharmaceutical machine manufacturing

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combined with your educational qualification as a master's in Mechanical Engineering, I am convinced

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role would be a right fit for you. I suggest you apply for

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on the

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website,

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send your updated resume to the hiring manager expressing your keen interest in the

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and do not forget to include me in copy.

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, you should put my name in the referral section on the application form, I would definitely put in a recommendation for you internally with the hiring manager and our HR team. Looking forward to progressing on

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front. Hope to see you soon! Darshit

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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